Positives:
- During the visual language session I got some positive feedback for the poster - that it was well designed and impactful.
- I am really happy that I went with this composition and decided to crop the image. Initially I was afraid that this would seem too simple - lacking depth, line of sight ect, all of the components that we have learnt in the last session. But what I have realised is that not every image I make has to consider all these components, sometimes simple is better if its appropriate.
- I think that people who knew the character behind the work, thought it well represented him and that the caption was funny (which made me happy).
- I think I have showed a good use simple and bold shape to construct an image - using shape I think has helped to make the image really immediate.
Things I could have done better:
- I think I could have used the potential of creating a third colour through overlapping to add more embellishment and detail. I think this would have worked particularly well in the moustache and would have helped to make it the focal point of the image.
- The text seems badly constructed and out of place. It would have been better centred and smaller - I think giving it room to breadth would have made it more legible and would have given opportunity for even spacing whilst still keeping f*****g in the centre.
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