CRIT

• I was a bit all over the place for this crit because I think I just felt like I had not done enough work, or that I just did not really have anything to present… 
• The feedback that I got though…seemed positive. I think people appreciated the idea and thought that the work I had done so far was good. 
• From this I think I have decided that I need to focus in on one little scene or element of this animal conflict. Jamie liked the baboons climbing across the rooftops and identified it as a potential good composition to just have it running across the postcard in landscape - I like that and think I am going to run with it. 

• So I need to do some more sketches like this… 
• I really do like them - I think there immediate, they communicate what I want about the human - animal conflict, and animals in urban environments, and they will translate well into simple shapes on illustrator.