CRIT FEEDBACK
- "really lovely use of texture. love how you've combined graphic shapes with textured drawings & characters, v intriguing/eye-catching."
- "the composition is spot on! really tells a story"
- "feels more personal than zine, mix of collage and hand-drawn elements is cool, sense of authorship."
- "straight forward, it's murakami's work"
It was really good to see, according to the crit feedback that I had achieved what I set out to with these images - they told a story about Murakami and his work, were recognisable as images related to him as an author, and a greater sense of authorship/personality to my work through hand-drawn textures and characters. Personally I feel like my work is heading in an exciting direction, but I still feel like Im chasing this never ending aesthetic of how I want my work to look, getting closer and closer to it each time but never completely there :((.
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