WHAT I LIKE:
- I like how I managed to combine my love for graphic, simple collage with textured hand-drawn patterns and characters - I think this does give a greater sense of personality and authorship to my work. Also I think the photographs and hand-drawn elements produce a really interesting hand-made/digital contrast.
- How the images are all so different, but because of the common use of media and aesthetic across all three, I feel they do work as a set.
- The composition of each image - in the square and the portrait I like how I used grey tone paper, contrasting with a white background to focus the composition, I think this is an interesting use of space and format (show's you don't need to fill the image).
WHAT I DON'T LIKE:
- Landscape - I am happy with this outcome to a certain extent, and it is definitely the format and concept I struggled with most so it is far better than the first attempt. However I feel it seems pretty off in some way - maybe photographs are wrong? and I could have redone the face? On the other hand I do think it communicates the concept effectively.
- The contrast between the blue digital aspects of the portrait and landscape images, with the hand-drawn elements I think at times looks too stark. Maybe it is the wrong colour blue, or the wrong colour entirely, or I should have added texture to these elements somehow?
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