After more storyboarding the egg and the bread as two characters, who were friends, is something that I began to really like as a narrative for my gifs. From this I choose to make this gif showing a small exchange between the two of them, when the bread's upset and the egg hold his hand.
What I like:
- For this whole brief Ive been talking about trying to 'say something' through my work and I think that this really achieves a small little moment that talks about the comfort of friendship. In this sense I am very happy with the final outcome.
- I like the aesthetic of the coloured pencil and the movement this creates, I also think it suits the childish and innocent nature of the interaction between the two characters.
Problems:
- On the other hand visually I do think that the gif is very glitchy and needs more work. The lack of a pencil background I think creates this horrible contrast between the handmade aesthetic of the characters and the sharp photoshop fill of the background.
- I also think that the exchange is too quick and the animation itself could do with double the amount of frames.
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