- 'love the woman, nice flowing lines' 'the lounging lady is so tranquil and flowy'
- 'the page with the 'two moons' quote on, 3rd image on left is really nice composition would be interesting to see developement of these'
- 'love the idea of his daily routine, could create prints with a real sense of order - think this would work well with your style'
- 'motif thumbnails are less obvious and more mysterious and dreamy. And if H.M uses dreams and surrealism in his writing, it still fits in'
GOING FORWARD:
I think the general consensus is that I should start experimenting and using these images within a variation of print processes - people suggesting all three of lino, screenprint and monoprint. In response to this crit, I am leaning towards focusing on the theme of motifs for my five final prints; however I feel like my other two themes would benefit from some more research and thumbnailing - I would like to do this and see if any ideas spring out at me.

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