Sting 1 draft

Two Moons test from Emily Chaffer on Vimeo.

• This was my second, more simple idea based around this particular print and personally I think it is a lot more effective. 
• The simplicity of movement means it does feel rushed but well rounded and finished. 
• I like how I have carried through the sense of structure and composition from my print into the sting. 
• The sound effects I feel are also really effective in achieving this interaction between reality and the otherworldly by contrasting with the animation content, but still seeming suitable. 

THINGS TO THINK ABOUT/MAKE BETTER

• The swing of the moon and smash I feel needs a little more flow or sense of gravity. 
• Do I put in the 'BBC' bit at the end? I feel it makes it look professional but also is this allowed/do I want it there? (maybe try it with a simple text title instead and then decide)
• If I have time I would like to add some movement into the textures to achieve a more handmade effect to the sting. I also think because the movement is so simple, this would add more interest without being overwhelming.