CRIT

Positives:

• Good feedback - sense of science, technology ect. 
• Like the use of collage - combination of cut shapes and image

Negatives/ things to work on:

• The poster - needs a greater sense of vastness, scale, texture, lost of the handmade, not sure about the text - again scale?
• The stamps seem out of place, flat? 

From this crit I think that I will go away and try make some adjustments to my final outcomes - especially to the poster as I feel this is the central object to the brief. On the other hand I do feel positive about the feedback I have gotten - it has made me feel that I have successful fulfilled my intent for this work and effectively communicated what I wanted about Carl Sagan.